Dr. Rudra picked
up his phone. Amidst
his continuous flow of
patients, he suddenly
remembered to make
the call. He is
a very busy man
with little time for
triviality. He sees
close to hundred patients
during his evening session
alone; what can be
termed as his rush
hour. He called up Sunita and
when she answered, he
said-' Hello. Dr.Rudra here.'
'Hello... How are
you doing?'
'Good good'- he
replied impatiently and continued-'
Listen, I called up
to inform you, your
husband is at my
house.'
'But... but why?'-her
alarm bells ringing incessantly.
'I don't know...'-
he answered truthfully.
************************************************************************
Looking at the
watch for umpteenth time,
Akash finally let out sigh of
relief. He wrapped up
his work for the
day, cleared his desk
and shut his system
down. Walking down to
the basement to get
his car, he gave
a call to his
wife. 'Hello...didn’t
you start yet?-she asked
immediately. ‘Yes dear.
I will be home
in one hour. Just
be ready.'
'Ready? Couldn’t
you think of coming
early at least for
one day?'
'Yes....’- He replied
sheepishly and said-'
Okay I am driving
now. I will see
you in an hour.'
Disconnecting the call,
he called his boss. His boss, Mr. Ramesh is a busy man who hates
to get interrupted by phone calls when he is at work. Akash called him up to
inform him that he was leaving for the day. Ramesh merely grunted his approval
and got back to his work as if the call never took place.
Driving in the traffic, his thoughts
began to wander. On this very day, he got married to Sunita two years ago. Last
year, being the ideal husband, he forgot his anniversary date and ended up
going late in the night to home. It goes without saying that he was very lucky
to escape without any bruises. Of course, his phone took the brunt of it
instead as she flung it across the wall and broke it into pieces which even the
phone makers couldn’t reassemble it. But no matter what all philosophers in the
world joke about women, wives will always love their husbands. She bought him a
new phone the very next day and the first thing Akash did in his new phone was
to set up a reminder for next year anniversary date. That small spark of
intelligence saved his day today. The reminder went off in the morning when he
was planning a long day at office. Akash smiled to himself, as he drove around
the city. Sunita is a strong headed girl. He remembered how he quit smoking
just after his marriage when she casually remarked-'If suicide is a crime, I
wish they arrest all smokers soon.’ It hit him like a thunderbolt.
Akash smiled again to himself and steered
his car into the parkway of the Almond House, one of the best sweet house of
the city.
Sunita was nervous. She has been trying
his phone for a long time but couldn’t reach him at all. She knew Akash’s phone
is never unreachable and her worst fears started haunting her as every second
passed by. All sorts of thoughts and questions started taking a shape in her
fickle mind. She was sitting at the portico of her house when she received the
call from Dr.Rudra. Her fears got confirmed when she heard his impatient words.
Even before she could enquire him further, he disconnected the call. But a
sense of relief went through her body realizing that her husband was safe. It
was only after few minutes did she start thinking clearly and new questions
started to take form in her mind. Why did Akash go to doctor’s house? Did he
fall sick? If he did, he would have gone to his clinic. Why did he go to his
house? Why is his phone switched off? Of course, the doctor is his brother. So
if he was just visiting his brother’s family, why didn’t he call her? She
needed answers and she wanted them fast. Her fears were slowly replaced by cold
anger.
Ramesh was busy at his work. One can't
really say if he loved his work or hated it, but he surely works hard. He hates
disturbance of any kind and despises people who call him without any real
purpose. While his fingers were tapping the keyboard with ferocity, his phone
rang. Twitching his nose irritably, he glanced at the screen to see the caller
name. It was Akash. He vaguely remembered that they spoke just a little while
ago when he called to say he was leaving. He couldn’t comprehend as to why he
was calling again except perhaps to give some stupid reason to take leave from
work. He ignored the call and got back to work, when the phone rang again.
Without taking his eyes from the system, he answered the call and said-' Yes
Akash...'
'Hello. Am I talking to Ramesh?' said a
gruff voice.
'Yes Akash...Who else do you think will
answer my phone?'
'Yeah! But this is not Akash here.'- pat
came the reply. Ramesh sat straight immediately and asked cautiously-’who is
this?’
‘I found this phone on the road. How do I
return it to the owner?'- A voice not older than 15 years, said. Ramesh mumbled
something to the tune of ' irresponsible bugger' and said,-'Yes. It belongs to
my friend. Where are you right now?'
'Near Almond House.'
'Ok. Can you stay there for 15 mins? I
will ask my son to come and pick it up. What is your name?'
'Okay, but this phone is dead. I charged
it temporarily at a store near by to make this call. I will be standing just
outside the Almond House. I am wearing an Orange shirt, in case your son wants
to recognize me.'
'Okay. Thank you'-The phone gets
disconnected and Ramesh swore under his breath. He called up his son and asked
him to take the phone immediately.
Akash stopped his car and started
searching everywhere in the car. It is scientifically proved that even if one loses his wallet, he would remain calm
but if he loses his phone, he loses his mind. He immediately found the nearest
public telephone and called his number. It was switched off. Standing on the
pavement, he couldn’t believe he lost his phone. It was with him all the time
and it was impossible to lose it or getting stolen. He looked at his watch and
thought of informing his wife. His husband instinct told him to wait for
sometime before telling her. He knew, this time he would face the brunt and no
phone would save him. Swearing loudly, he started thinking of all the places where
he might have dropped it. He could think of only one place-The Almond House. He
drove back to place and started looking at all the places where he walked by.
It is but quite natural that he didn’t find his phone. That phone was special
to him in many ways. It was a gift from his wife and losing it on his wedding
day just made things worse. He went across the counter at the sweet shop and
enquired about it, but none of them had seen or heard of it. Swearing again
under his breath, he walked out furiously to his car. Life without a phone is
like trying to eat without your hands. A person feels handicapped when he
doesn’t have the weight in his pocket. With his mind clouded with confusion and
anger, he drove his car to his brother’s house near by. It was time he informed
his wife that he was running late and has to admit he doesn’t remember her
phone number. With the advent of mobile phones, the old art of remembering the
phone numbers is quietly diminishing and Akash learnt it the hard way. He
reached his brother’s house and realized his brother would be at the hospital.
He asked his sister in law, if she has his wife’s number. If Da Vinci had seen
the look she then gave him, he would have never painted ‘The Mona Lisa’ She
smiled and said her husband would be having all numbers. She called him up,
hoping he answers but to no use. She told Akash that she would ask him to
inform Sunita if he calls back. Nodding his head, Akash took his car out again
and started driving home. He gave a quick glance towards the Almond House, as
he was passing by. But he never noticed a man standing at the entrance, wearing
an Orange shirt.

err..honestly, below your usually good standards. :)
ReplyDeletequiet confusing or probably its because I am that dumb...sorry mate..
Good in parts but witty comments throughout.
ReplyDeleteWas expecting it to be a full fledged story. Is there a part 2 coming to close the loose ends?
very well written.. i w'd say a gud story backed by thought... keep it up aditya...
ReplyDeleteRedefining Oblivion wishes you a Very Happy, Healthy, Prosperous and Purposeful 2012, and beyond.
ReplyDelete@Chandu-yeah way below standards. Should improve :)
ReplyDelete@ Shashikanth- This is it man! A new one is coming soon though.
@Abhinav- Thanks.
@ Rakesh- Thank you and wish you the same!
Hi... thought you had gone off blogging. Nice to see you back. The above comments are rather critical of your writing, but I thought it was nice.
ReplyDelete@radha- Thanks. Well it didn't come out well, I know. Thanks for the visit :)
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